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alex_beecroftSo yesterday was 'Talk like a Pirate Day'. That only makes it fair that today is the lesser known but equally important 'Talk like a Pirate Hunter Day'.
Encompassing 'talk like Stephen Maturin day', 'talk like James Norrington day', 'jour du parler comme Andrew Gillette', (or 'Caint comh maith le Andrew Gillette' if you prefer him Irish - thanks,![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
classics_lover!), 'talk like Horatio Hornblower day', 'talk like the cannon-fodder redcoat in the background day', 'talk like Temeraire day', 'which it is talk like Preserved Killick day' and many others
In honour of this, I thought I'd post a suitably martial excerpt from 'Captain's Surrender'.
Peter, Josh and a senior Captain, Captain Joslyn have been sent to intercept a French two-decker believed to be trying to break the Hudson Bay treaty by capturing the bay for France, but they have come across a smaller scout ship on the way.
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By the following day they had gained ten miles, and could see her quite clearly, green hull banded with cheerful yellow. The name painted on her stern was Virginie, a thirty two, a little heavier than the Macedonian. She was flying a Dutch flag, but apart from the sheer implausibility of this, the coxswain's mate recognized her as the 32 which had taken him prisoner in '67 and had then been under Captain Jean-Paul deBourne, a gentleman of the old school.
“Sir,” said Peter's First Lieutenant, the newly senior Mr. Howe, “that's the Hudson Strait ahead, sir. If we don't do something now, and there is a two-decker in the Bay, well, our prospects will be considerably worse.”
The man affected Peter like a bad smell – quite unfairly, for he was a competent officer, and this was a justified worry that Peter shared. He supposed it was just that he was used to Joshua there, with whom he would have shared his thoughts, and the knowledge that Josh was on his own ship, inaccessible, made his rigid back ache.
“Mr. Howe, I suppose it has not occurred to you that I might have already thought of this? Nor that your asking the question is disrespectful in the utmost to Captain Joslyn, who can be supposed to have thought of this too?”
“No sir, sorry, sir,” said Howe, rubbing a hand over the cocoa-brown stubble on his chin and looking cowed. Worried that he might be turning into a monster of authority like Walker, Peter relented.
“However, I think we can begin putting things in train for action. We won't clear until we're given the order, but there will be no harm in putting out the fearnought screens and slow-match now.
“Aye aye, sir.” Howe smiled and hurried away, and feeling the need for something to counterbalance his presence, Peter took out his glass and trained it on the Macedonian, watching the small figure of her Captain on his own quarterdeck. He had left off the expensive and prestigious wig, and in the red tinged sunset light, his own hair shone like a point of fire. Peter, admiring both ship and man, huddled into his greatcoat, and felt briefly piercingly happy. Josh at his right hand, and a steady colleague at his left, a battle ahead, and the sun going down in a sheet of flame over a blue shadow of land. There was a smell of slow-match in the air, and all the world seemed eager, poised for glory.
Life, he thought, did not get much better than this, and at the thought some presentiment of danger made him reach out and stroke the Seahorse's rail, touching wood.
The signal to engage broke out on the Asp and time for reflection was over. On deck the cannons were set loose, and there was a rumbling below as the larger 38 pounders were brought into action on the gun deck. Ship's boys ran up from the armory with canisters of shot and powder, and the swivel guns at the bow were already shotted and primed.
“All divisions ready, sir,” Howe reported, returning like an unwanted guest.
“Bow chasers fire at will,” Peter commanded, “and a guinea for the man who shoots out the first sail.”
The swivels barked with a high pitched note, like terriers, and the crews of the cannon tied up their hair with their scarves, spat on their hands. Seahorse plunged through the smoke and the cold arctic air was briefly warm and thick, smelling of gunpowder.
But the Virginie had been lying to them about her speed. Now her Captain trimmed the yards, she filled, and staysails broke out on all masts, spritsail and spritsail topsail on her boom. At once she leaped forward out of range. Peter ordered staysails set himself, and royals, touching the braces of the masts to feel whether they would take it. To starboard, the Macedonian came up beside them, her more powerful chasers firing. A ball hit the Virginie's stern galley and a spray of glass leaped up, glittering. A little closer and – though they could not rake her with a broadside – they might keep up a steady fire with the swivels, sending shot the whole unprotected length of her deck.
No, not unprotected, for now the Virginie's stern chasers spoke – there was a yellow cloud of smoke and a roar. He felt the wind as the ball passed his elbow, made a hole in the hammock netting behind him, and he laughed, feeling all earthly cares depart at the nearness of death.
“Like that, is it?”
Looking back, he saw that the burst of speed was leaving the Asp behind, and he wondered why Virginie had not done this at the start, but had deliberately allowed the Fourth Rate to keep up. Was she that confident that the three decker she undoubtedly believed he knew nothing about would be enough to take on three British warships? Well, it was time to disabuse her of that notion, he'd take on the Indomitable on his own, if he had to, and win too.
The wind remained constant. Peter gave the order for the studding-sails to be set, just as the Virginie began her turn into Hudson straight. The speed cracked on, they were sailing now at 13 knots straight towards Virginie's turned broadside, and the French Captain took the opportunity to open a full roaring fire, raking the Seahorse from stem to stern. The air was full of metal. One of the gun crew, receiving a ball in the breast, was literally burst apart and his limbs landed on either side of the boat, his severed head catching in the splinter netting and hanging there.
The men on deck flung themselves flat on the boards, including Midshipman Prendergast, a boy of thirteen, for whom this was his first experience of battle.
Peter walked over to the boy, acutely conscious that the gun crews on the Virginie were re-loading and that the second broadside would be closer, more deadly, as the strip of water between the vessels narrowed. “Stand up, Mr. Prendergast,” he said firmly. “A gentleman does not cower.” He took the boy by the elbow, feeling the racking shudders of fear, and stood him on his feet, with a smile. Then he leaned forward and whispered the words his own Captain had told him on a similar occasion, long ago. “If you cannot be brave, it is perfectly adequate to pretend. But pretend you must. How would the men feel otherwise, seeing their officers afraid?”
The boy gave him a waxy smile in return and nodded. Then he was promptly sick into his hat.
Encompassing 'talk like Stephen Maturin day', 'talk like James Norrington day', 'jour du parler comme Andrew Gillette', (or 'Caint comh maith le Andrew Gillette' if you prefer him Irish - thanks,
classics_lover!), 'talk like Horatio Hornblower day', 'talk like the cannon-fodder redcoat in the background day', 'talk like Temeraire day', 'which it is talk like Preserved Killick day' and many othersIn honour of this, I thought I'd post a suitably martial excerpt from 'Captain's Surrender'.
Peter, Josh and a senior Captain, Captain Joslyn have been sent to intercept a French two-decker believed to be trying to break the Hudson Bay treaty by capturing the bay for France, but they have come across a smaller scout ship on the way.
*******************
By the following day they had gained ten miles, and could see her quite clearly, green hull banded with cheerful yellow. The name painted on her stern was Virginie, a thirty two, a little heavier than the Macedonian. She was flying a Dutch flag, but apart from the sheer implausibility of this, the coxswain's mate recognized her as the 32 which had taken him prisoner in '67 and had then been under Captain Jean-Paul deBourne, a gentleman of the old school.
“Sir,” said Peter's First Lieutenant, the newly senior Mr. Howe, “that's the Hudson Strait ahead, sir. If we don't do something now, and there is a two-decker in the Bay, well, our prospects will be considerably worse.”
The man affected Peter like a bad smell – quite unfairly, for he was a competent officer, and this was a justified worry that Peter shared. He supposed it was just that he was used to Joshua there, with whom he would have shared his thoughts, and the knowledge that Josh was on his own ship, inaccessible, made his rigid back ache.
“Mr. Howe, I suppose it has not occurred to you that I might have already thought of this? Nor that your asking the question is disrespectful in the utmost to Captain Joslyn, who can be supposed to have thought of this too?”
“No sir, sorry, sir,” said Howe, rubbing a hand over the cocoa-brown stubble on his chin and looking cowed. Worried that he might be turning into a monster of authority like Walker, Peter relented.
“However, I think we can begin putting things in train for action. We won't clear until we're given the order, but there will be no harm in putting out the fearnought screens and slow-match now.
“Aye aye, sir.” Howe smiled and hurried away, and feeling the need for something to counterbalance his presence, Peter took out his glass and trained it on the Macedonian, watching the small figure of her Captain on his own quarterdeck. He had left off the expensive and prestigious wig, and in the red tinged sunset light, his own hair shone like a point of fire. Peter, admiring both ship and man, huddled into his greatcoat, and felt briefly piercingly happy. Josh at his right hand, and a steady colleague at his left, a battle ahead, and the sun going down in a sheet of flame over a blue shadow of land. There was a smell of slow-match in the air, and all the world seemed eager, poised for glory.
Life, he thought, did not get much better than this, and at the thought some presentiment of danger made him reach out and stroke the Seahorse's rail, touching wood.
The signal to engage broke out on the Asp and time for reflection was over. On deck the cannons were set loose, and there was a rumbling below as the larger 38 pounders were brought into action on the gun deck. Ship's boys ran up from the armory with canisters of shot and powder, and the swivel guns at the bow were already shotted and primed.
“All divisions ready, sir,” Howe reported, returning like an unwanted guest.
“Bow chasers fire at will,” Peter commanded, “and a guinea for the man who shoots out the first sail.”
The swivels barked with a high pitched note, like terriers, and the crews of the cannon tied up their hair with their scarves, spat on their hands. Seahorse plunged through the smoke and the cold arctic air was briefly warm and thick, smelling of gunpowder.
But the Virginie had been lying to them about her speed. Now her Captain trimmed the yards, she filled, and staysails broke out on all masts, spritsail and spritsail topsail on her boom. At once she leaped forward out of range. Peter ordered staysails set himself, and royals, touching the braces of the masts to feel whether they would take it. To starboard, the Macedonian came up beside them, her more powerful chasers firing. A ball hit the Virginie's stern galley and a spray of glass leaped up, glittering. A little closer and – though they could not rake her with a broadside – they might keep up a steady fire with the swivels, sending shot the whole unprotected length of her deck.
No, not unprotected, for now the Virginie's stern chasers spoke – there was a yellow cloud of smoke and a roar. He felt the wind as the ball passed his elbow, made a hole in the hammock netting behind him, and he laughed, feeling all earthly cares depart at the nearness of death.
“Like that, is it?”
Looking back, he saw that the burst of speed was leaving the Asp behind, and he wondered why Virginie had not done this at the start, but had deliberately allowed the Fourth Rate to keep up. Was she that confident that the three decker she undoubtedly believed he knew nothing about would be enough to take on three British warships? Well, it was time to disabuse her of that notion, he'd take on the Indomitable on his own, if he had to, and win too.
The wind remained constant. Peter gave the order for the studding-sails to be set, just as the Virginie began her turn into Hudson straight. The speed cracked on, they were sailing now at 13 knots straight towards Virginie's turned broadside, and the French Captain took the opportunity to open a full roaring fire, raking the Seahorse from stem to stern. The air was full of metal. One of the gun crew, receiving a ball in the breast, was literally burst apart and his limbs landed on either side of the boat, his severed head catching in the splinter netting and hanging there.
The men on deck flung themselves flat on the boards, including Midshipman Prendergast, a boy of thirteen, for whom this was his first experience of battle.
Peter walked over to the boy, acutely conscious that the gun crews on the Virginie were re-loading and that the second broadside would be closer, more deadly, as the strip of water between the vessels narrowed. “Stand up, Mr. Prendergast,” he said firmly. “A gentleman does not cower.” He took the boy by the elbow, feeling the racking shudders of fear, and stood him on his feet, with a smile. Then he leaned forward and whispered the words his own Captain had told him on a similar occasion, long ago. “If you cannot be brave, it is perfectly adequate to pretend. But pretend you must. How would the men feel otherwise, seeing their officers afraid?”
The boy gave him a waxy smile in return and nodded. Then he was promptly sick into his hat.
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Date: 2007-09-20 11:17 am (UTC)Love that! :D
Can I please have the book now?!...;D
PS 'jour pour dites comme Andrew Gillette'
which it is rather 'Jour du parler comme...'
dire: tell, say
parler: speak, talk
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Date: 2007-09-20 11:29 am (UTC)Thanks for the French correction! I hoped someone would put me right (my French is so very pidgin that it probably doesn't really exist at all.) I'll go and alter that now. Thank you!
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Date: 2007-09-20 11:31 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-09-20 02:24 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-09-21 06:32 am (UTC)December ? Very, very well. :)
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Date: 2007-09-22 11:53 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-09-20 12:25 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-09-20 02:32 pm (UTC)We're aiming for a release date of 1st December by the time all the editing is done (it hasn't started yet), so hopefully it'll be out just in time for Christmas :)
I was going to ask how yours was coming, and then I thought that perhaps you were waiting to launch it until you felt better, because there'll be a lot of work involved in packing and posting once it's available to buy. But that's on my wish list too.
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Date: 2007-09-23 12:25 pm (UTC)sometimes I worry that there's too much romance and not enough Age of Sail in the book
I always admired your talent to write with an authentic feeling, yet not so authentic as to give people the feeling that they had to blow the dust away before starting reading. It's a very delicate line, but you are really good at keeping the balance perfectly. Really, there is nothing you have to worry about.
I was going to ask how yours was coming, and then I thought that perhaps you were waiting to launch it until you felt better
You guessed right. We'll finish the cover and upload the manuscript next week, then things are starting. Though self-published, I had to change my plan and go the "publication through the printers" way, because I simply couldn't manage right now. Of course the book will be available through the website, but later on also through Amazon and bookshops etc. It will take months before I'm really fit again, and as much as I hate it, I have to take that in account. Still, it should be out in October, and I'm looking very much forward to.
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Date: 2007-09-24 09:46 am (UTC)Thank you! I should be getting stuck into the editing soon, though, and I wonder how many of the deliberate archaisms will survive that process, and whether it will end up being slightly modernized for modern readers. It's going to be an interesting experience :)
Woohoo for Samuel Blackwood being uploaded this week! Will you have to go through the 'get the first copy and proof-read it, then decide whether you need to re-upload it and go through the same process again' process that I'm having to do with Witch's Boy? If not, you may still get yours out before mine :) (I found a couple of mistakes in my first copy and decided to do a second, which means it may not make it live until October either.)
I hope yours takes off like a rocket, to the extent that you never need another job :)
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Date: 2007-09-24 10:34 am (UTC)Yes, I'll get a copy to proof-read first. I haven't felt well for a while, even before the Big Lung Debacle of 2007, so I don't trust my judgement. Better safe than emails from unhappy readers. :-)
I hope yours takes off like a rocket, to the extent that you never need another job :)
Thanks a lot! I can only return this wish, however, as far as my book is concerned, the stake is "I want to sell 100 copies", which will very likely not be enough to feed the cats. :) Eh, you have to start somewhere!
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Date: 2007-09-20 01:36 pm (UTC)*rubs hands in anticipatory glee*
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Date: 2007-09-20 02:36 pm (UTC)I believe we're aiming for a 1st December release date, once it's been edited, so you can always claim it's an early Christmas present :) Thank you!
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Date: 2007-09-20 04:25 pm (UTC)As this is a romance, I must mention that I also really enjoyed the little moment of Peter gazing over at Josh before the fight, seeing both the reliable battle companion and a beloved person.
But apart from that, I really admire you for being able to write a naval fight that works and sounds convincing. Remember our e-mail conversation about how your writing makes me feel at times? This is actually a very good example. :)
And have I ever told you that I like your ship names?
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Date: 2007-09-20 05:01 pm (UTC)Re: wow
Date: 2007-09-20 08:05 pm (UTC)The plan is for it to be released on the 1st of December, once the editing is finished, but you can be sure I'll be shouting very loud about it when I have a firmer date :) Thanks!
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Date: 2007-09-20 07:45 pm (UTC)I am very glad that the battle works as a proper Age of Sail sort of thing. I didn't want to sacrifice the AoS side to the romance, and just have people wearing costumes, if you know what I mean. Heh, and this took much poring over atlases and going 'oh no! Even at thirteen knots they couldn't have got there for a week! Gah, quick write some bridging material!' before it was even vaguely realistic :)
I took my ship names from a site called 'Ships of the Old Navy 1780-1840' but it sadly doesn't seem to exist any more. However, I've just found a replacement here (http://www.ageofnelson.org/MichaelPhillips/liste.php?char=A) which is a great relief as I'm utterly hopeless at making up ones which sound right!
Anyway, thank you so much! I'm all the more happy to know that you fancy the book, when I know that the romance is probably not to your taste. Thank you!
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Date: 2007-09-20 05:19 pm (UTC)And December 1st is a good date, as I get paid on the 28th of every month and therefore I will be able to buy it as soon as it comes out.
I got "Mother Clap's Molly House: The Gay Subculture in England" from Interlibrary Loan yesterday. You should see the looks I get from people when I tell them what I'm reading. Not bad looks, but kind of, "What's a straight American girl reading a book on gay men in 18th century England?" kind of look. *g*
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Date: 2007-09-20 07:55 pm (UTC)Oh, I just got 'Mother Clap's Molly House' myself! It's very interesting, but not the sort of title you can tell people without eliciting strange looks. The cover's a bit dodgy too. Not to worry though, everything is excused by the words 'I'm doing research for my novel' :)
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Date: 2007-09-20 09:00 pm (UTC)Go figure. ;P After that, I didn't want to even try to explain how PotC got me interested!
One of my friends brought up the point that if I am able to find sources, etc. and write it well enough the paper may be publishable in an academic journal or something. It's something to think about. *g*
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Date: 2007-09-22 11:58 am (UTC)Heh, not that I'm trying to make things difficult for you or anything! Sorry!
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Date: 2007-09-22 12:07 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-09-20 05:38 pm (UTC)Lovely moment of kindness for Prendergast. Touching. Fabulous. When can I get it? *begs*
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Date: 2007-09-20 07:59 pm (UTC)Hurray! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. 1st of December is the release date that's being kicked around at present. Whether it finally *is* the 1st or not, I don't know, but that's what the plan is :) Thank you!
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Date: 2007-09-21 06:29 am (UTC)Squee ! :)
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Date: 2007-09-20 08:51 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-09-21 09:18 am (UTC)I'll hope that the rest of it lives up to this bit then :) Thank you!
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Date: 2007-09-21 03:49 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2007-09-21 04:55 pm (UTC)More? Pwease? ;)
Seriously, this will be a fabulous addition to my "AoS/RN book" shelf. Which is growing heavier by the day. Can't wait for December to arrive, and WHEEEEEE!!!!! so happy for you! :D
Actually, I feel kinda bad for leaving such a silly comment and not being able to write something more deserving of your awesome writing - but my brain is hospital-fried. ;)
Hope all is well with you and yours!
Take care! *hugs*
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Date: 2007-09-22 07:29 pm (UTC)(And for discretion in reading it in non-gay friendly or non-romance friendly places, I've done a dustcover for it here (http://www.alexbeecroft.com/otherfree.shtml):)
This was a lovely comment, so don't worry about that! Particularly as I have snatched a moment to gaze adoringly on your lovely midshipmen on their seachest, but won't be able to comment on it properly until Monday (when there's less risk of the family seeing.) Suffice it to say it will be a squeeful comment! I particularly love Mr. Gillette's expression!
Thanks so much for the comment, and kick me if I don't comment on yours on Monday! :)